Yellow Flower
>> Saturday, March 29, 2008
Slow, majestic moving
so vivid, I woke up earth seeing,
a woman’s honey-sweet
yellow flowering.
Her fresh flower of yellow,
moistened with dew and rain,
after a whole night’s kisses with
her lover-moon.
2 comments:
very nice imagery of the sun as a flower, I enjoyed this poem and the most recent one most of the last six.
thanks for the comment...i am flattered.
hope you could give more comments for my other poems so that i could also know how is my writing.
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