Rain Shower
>> Thursday, April 3, 2008
I walk under the rain
bare,
naked.
Imagine
each rain drop
is a sword.
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I walk under the rain
bare,
naked.
Imagine
each rain drop
is a sword.
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8 comments:
Simple poem, yet full of effect.
Nice, sensual... short, nice poem :)
Your poems are good, but what about at least 3-4 paragraphs of an inspiring poem? You can submit two for perusal, thanks.
@quackster: thanks! i really wanted it to be simple, but full of emotion.
@garyhess: thanks for your appreciation of my poem. hope to see you more over here to give your feedbacks over my writing
@Jena Isle: yep, i have quite a number of poems that are longer in structure. i will try to load them up here
Briliant! But this poem makes me want to hear more.
Is this a teaser or a short prologue of something even better?
Z
Ah, a quickie poem. I like. ",)
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